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Boy, I think I just spoiled who's fighting this chapter, didn't I?

Honestly, I'm actually disappointed with the way the second fight in this chapter turned out. I thought I could jam it with more action, but the more I stopped and thought about the fighters, the more I realized how hard it was for me not to make it a curbstomp considering their individual skill sets and abilities. 

Or maybe that's just because I had a hard time getting into the fight when I was writing it last night. 

Hopefully next chapter will be better, though I'm expecting delays considering that Darkest Dungeon's full release comes out tomorrow, but then again I do need a break from all of this writing. 

Well whenever the next chapter comes out, I'll see you then ;)
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Can't wait to see what END's bride can do if Mards capable of this.