Cornelia of the Defection CHAPTER 4

I am having issues posting my review on fanfiction.net...it says I reviewed it but its not showing up at all and not even in my review history is showing it so I'll post a copy/improved version here. 

This chapter did take me awhile to get through, but you are right this story has Cornelia has one of the main focus of the story, with her name in the title for crying out loud lol, so yeah she needs a chapter with her in the spotlight. 

"What about me I deserve my own story?" - Guinevere

"Nobody likes you and no sane person would make a story about you," - Me

"Please I deserve my own story more than that," Guinevere

"SECURITY!" - Me

*Guinevere is suddenly taken down and dragged away by security who happens to be members of the Cornelia fan base*

Anyway joking aside moving onto the review at hand. Overall a very good and impressive job with Cornelia's backstory in this with very well with the first meeting done between Cornelia and Marianne being handle quite well, not to mention it was kind cute too in a way I am sure people will go aww over. Then we got the wedding event where Guinevere is properly introduced into story as a spoil rotten brat amount other things which I don't need to go into detail on. Somehow I get the feeling Guinevere and Cornelia will have a rematch of shorts latter on especially once their rebellion gets fully underway.

Now I got to admit I did love the part where Nonnette and Cornelia met and I already got the feeling its going to be beautiful friendship for those two lol. Also I do want to know I like how you captured her stubbornness and wish to only rely on herself without others helping her, which is something that Guilford and Dalton discussed in the novels on events regarding Guilford's selection as her knight when previously Cornelia was insistent on the fact that she didn't need a knight. So I really have to say you nailed how her younger self is noted to have been like according to some characters.

Also Cornelia's mother I think was written quite well and oddly she matches as she was briefly mentioned in the novel when Euphy was first leaving for Area 11. Although it was brief I feel you got her down as well too, which only has me even more impressed with this chapter.

With Lelouch now literally at ground zero for the hotel incident I am interested to see how you are going to handle it this time around so l will await your next update.